City Night Sky

22 03 2010

Cloudy and polluted

Not even a star in sight

Just smog in the night


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22 03 2010
slpmartin

Sound a lot LA….you can see the smog for miles…good haiku.

8 04 2010
TriciaVivienne

Hey there…

This such an unusual style of poetry.

I’m living through one of the worst dry seasons in Trinidad at the moment. Trinidad is usually such a clean, blue skyline. Yet, at the moment, there’s so much dust and dirt in the air that this poem instantly reminded me of that picture.

Very vivid. 😀

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