That Tree

16 02 2010

Alone in that field

Regardless of what season

The tree is so bare


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4 responses

16 02 2010
pearlnelson

Very nice one. Pearl

16 02 2010
talibhaiku

Thanks pearl, I would remember passing by on the train to some college a few years back- this field and that lone spooky, greyish tree would always stand out in my mind.

16 02 2010
dh127

The loneliness is emphasized in my mind’s eye by the bareness of the tree. I even envisioned it as greyish. You drew such a complete picture with so few words. I have much to learn from you, Talib.

16 02 2010
talibhaiku

Thank you for your kind and generous comments Dani, it was a tad bit spookey to see- but not frightening, loneliness definately comes to mind.

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